Monday, November 19, 2012

Writing and Cooking with Fire

Watching the programming on The Food Network I'm struck by how the network's implied mantra is similar to the lifeblood of a writing teacher.  I've learned by reading and listening to many writers and educators, but two really stand out when I think of the connections between chef and writer: Don Graves, and Penny Kittle. Most of the connections I make in this essay come from Penny Kittle's Write Beside Them and often cross-over into many of the Food Network programs.

Based on Penny Kittle's vision, I see five similarities in the way chefs and writers develop their craft:

1. Chefs mentor other chefs. 
Programs such as The Next Food Network Star, and The Worst Chef in America place chefs and home cooks in situations where an accomplished chef can advise, demonstrate, and challenge.

Often, writing teachers confer with students over their writing by asking how can I help you? tell me what you're doing as a writer at this moment? why did you decide to do it that way?

We try to leave our fledgling writers and developing chefs excited to get back to writing and cooking. We each try to make a point of what is working as well as what we'd like to see.

2. Mentor chefs offer feedback on surface errors and deeper revision.
Many shows built on competition such as Sweet Genius, Cupcake Wars, and Restaurant Impossible highlight problems that may or may not be corrected without guidance from the master chef.

Writing teachers remind themselves "Teach the Writer, not the Writing," and while I see the complementary "Teach the Cook, not the Cooking" in many of the Food Network programs, I see this explicitly in shows like Restaurant Impossible. Chef Robert Irvine often teaches people how to work within their strengths, experiences, and limitations in order to create a final product that can stand up to the local competition.

Our focus as writing teachers is always on the individual writer. We try to help students find what is buried within a first draft, a first attempt. It is about more than focusing on what we did wrong--we work to have writers understand what they did right and to embrace the possibilities.

3. We see, in many of these shows, that cooking is often for an audience as much as it is for our own sense of peace and joy.
Diners, Drive-Ins, and Dives, The Great Food Truck Race, are audience-based. Viewers write-in to DDD to suggest a local place that is doing food the right way. The Great Food Truck Race bases its decisions on who sold the most product--a combination of charging the right amount for the money spent. However, when listening to the teams plane, they often have to consider their audience. What is the community used to eating and paying. Are there local foods or traditions that might be honored on their food truck menu?


4. High profile, Food Network chefs not only offer advice or evaluate the food produced by guest chefs from across the country but also place their food on the table for evaluation.
This impresses me the most. The programs that highlight this circumstance often end up my favorites: Iron Chef, Next Iron Chef, Chopped. These chefs demonstrate their own struggles with cooking. While many have years of experience, they show us that cooking is an art, chefs are human, and neither can perfect every time.

Like writing, chefs have to do a lot of their craft before they produce the good stuff.

Ralph Fletcher writes that a mentor teacher can influence student writers by having high standards, building on strengths, valuing originally and diversity, and encouraging students to take risks. Our passion and ability to see the big picture can help guide young writers through the process--but it only works when we write beside them. When we present ourselves as mentors rather than judges, we lend a hand to a lot of young writers.

5. Vision: chefs speak about food, culture, and other chefs with humility and passion. 

It becomes obvious when you hear a chef such as Aaron Sanchez speak of the influences of his upbringing, his culture, and his mother that cooking is something he realizes he may never master. Chefs listen to other chefs; taste their food; and delight in the many differences of food and cooking.

Chefs understand the the construction of a meal and can explain how the parts work together to create the whole. They demonstrate that their knowledge is to be shared and that they can always learn from other.


Don Murray once wrote, “I am apprenticed to two crafts I can never masterwriting and teaching. As writing teachers we are constantly reading and writing so that we may share the vision for how others work, expand our minds to be more open to possibilities, and see that our "ordinary" lives are alive with topics.

When I watch The Food Network, and see chefs such as Geoffrey Zacharian well-up over an achievement, or compliment another chef over their execution, I hear and see his passion for cooking.  It reminds me of what I read in Ralph Fletcher's What a Writer Needs: "Passion remains the most important quality the mentor has to offer. When we think back on those teachers we looked up to, we don't always remember exactly what they taught. Above everything, we remember passion. Fire."

Lo and behold, the seminal ingredient in cooking and writing is the same: Fire.

Sunday, November 18, 2012

Three Emerging Roles Twitter Plays in My Class: Live Notes

Now that I have walked the students through the basics of Tweeting (Author Chats) and mentored what live tweeting (Field Trip) looks like, I am going to have my classes "live tweet" the class in a couple of formats.

Format 1: Small Group Tweets
Each day over the course of a week, iPads will be distributed to two different groups of three or four students.

Each member of the group will be assigned a role--Leader/Editor; Recorder(s); Checker; Spokesperson.

The Leader/Editor will track the proposed tweets according to a rubric/checklist. It lists the topics of the day--he/she must make sure that each topic gets represented by at least one Tweet.

The Recorder(s) writes the notes as things occur in class. Notes can be things said verbatim, or they can also note their confusion or something they feel requires more coverage. This is potentially a job for two people. This information is done on loose leaf or in a writer's notebook.

The Checker takes the notes written by the Recorder and checks them for accuracy and makes sure that it fits into a Tweet (140 characters). He/she may edit or polish the note into a more efficient Tweet.

The Spokesperson actually enters and publishes the Tweets once the Recorder passes them along. He/she also presents them to the rest of the students during the last five minutes of the class. He/she provides an overview of the material their group was able to capture for the da.

Over the course of five classes, I imagine (and am planning on) the students will have created a useful study guide of the day. An added bonus, when students miss class and come later and ask, "what did I miss?"...I finally have a really strong response: check the class twitter account? On a related note, it will be useful for me to see what the students interpreted as essential information, as well as how they interpreted it.

I will be able to have the groups who are doing the live tweeting project their iPad on a screen on the wall--so the class can see the notes evolve (if I think that may be helpful).

Format 2: Large Group Tweets

All twelve iPads would be distributed to the class--two students may share an iPad.  As things occur in class, students are encouraged to treat the class as a text we were doing a close reading of together. Where we would use otherwise use post-its or highlighters to mark our confusion in a book, note our connections, ask a question, jot down an inspired though, we would now tweet those same concepts based on whatever we were doing in class.

The class account can be projected to a screen in the room, and as students mark their thoughts, we can see them and engage.

Here it would function as backchannel, but now there will be a record of it.


Final Thoughts

Each of those circumstances could also be placed on our district website--sort of an open classroom idea.

I anticipate executing these ideas after our brief Thanksgiving break.


Three Emerging Roles Twitter Plays in My Class: FIeld Trips

Continuing to share the emerging role Twitter plays in my 8th grade classroom, I want to share something I only stumbled upon last week. Our 8th grade social studies teachers organized a visit from a Civil War reenactment group who honors the 6th Pennsylvania Infantry Irish Regulars.

They came to our school and set up five stations outside: women in the Civil War, camp life, marching, enlistment, and artillery. For two hours, groups of our students cycled through station on the blustery Pennsylvania morning.

While listening to the women speak at the first session, I thought...why not live tweet the information these people are sharing? Our kids are listening, participating, and engaged...but no one is taking any notes.

I can take notes with Twitter. And I did.

I wrote down everything and anything. Knowing that our school's Twitter feed was live on our school website I also wanted to link my personal/profession Twitter account into that feed.

So, in the midst of keeping up with the Tweets, I texted our I.T. professional.  He loved the idea and then had to figure out how to connect what I was doing the school account (we know there are simple solutions but this was happening on the spur of the moment). He followed me with the school account, and then simply retweeted my Tweets.

Next week, we will be visited by a Lakota Indian who will share his culture and challenges with our students. I will also be live tweeting that guest visit.

This strikes me as valuable for parents, and potentially valuable for kids who may have missed school, but I find my instincts tell me it is most valuable as a model of using social networking in a responsible and positive way. I shared our experience with anyone who reads our website, and anyone who reads my tweets.

Information is power. And we are beginning see where the bulk of information is...and will contnue to be in the future. It leaves me wondering, what about those who do not have access to technology.

Will they not have access to information?

Or power?